w16sh, 20

sonnet, astronaut, cheese, glitter, karaoke

abab cdcd efef gg

cosmos-near/astro-in/stars   ….stars often a term for celebrities versus celestial objects.  to sour…., to shine.

karaoke.. kara – empty, oke orchestra. from the wiki/japanese term for singing along as if you were the star.

jumping in the seat YOU the astronaught

sours the milk time once a child’s friend

shows reality can cost quite a lot.

but it is adult soldier on transcend


for the kiddie milk fresh just can not last

many who try die it’s ne’er fun to cry

but cheese is not milk soured enough fast

as if to mock youth with truth’s laugh on high


but the child’s cry is the karaoke

all dreams are a gift that often glitter

we’re meant to shout out risk? okie dokie

laugh at the dangers – smiles for the shitter


but dream for the stars but dream for the stars

even if your stuck down here in your cars

By Starman Jones

Everything and Nothing interests me. I cook read, write and even have to clean. I SHOULD NOTE: I'm 40 something.

3 replies on “w16sh, 20”

Excellent write!
Yes, always dream for the stars! (Love the ending of this poem!)
HUGS!!! 🙂
PS…I wonder if any astronauts, up among the stars, have ever entertained themselves with cheese-eating, sonnet-writing, karaoke-singing, or glitter-sprinklin’??!! 😛 😉

naughts i mistype everything seemingly but I thought YOU would catch that i meant a spelling joke…astro in the stars naught or not 😉 I should advocate attention to the road! 😀

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