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Light’s out Haiku.

adrift in the normal

captivating paper plans

why’d I want the…heaven

By Starman Jones

Everything and Nothing interests me. I cook read, write and even have to clean. I SHOULD NOTE: I'm 40 something.

5 replies on “Light’s out Haiku.”

I like how the word “why’d” as a contraction is ambiguously either “why did” or “why would”. You have me look at it because of your 6/7/6 structure. It’s meant to be and not forced to fit. …hmmmm. Good one, Josh.

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